“I love it when you call me senorita. Serah!” Take the headphones off and start looking around. Ugh fine. And then I felt a pebble fall on my head. James! Did you throw a pebble on my head. I don't know what your talking about. So I looked up and saw a boulder. And then I tripped on a rope. I was about to get crushed. Before it crushed me I rolled out of the way. BANG!. The boulder was old and rusty. Suddenly a bridge aperd. I got scared so I ran and the bridge followed me I couldn't believe my eyes. I looked around for mum and James. I saw branches that look like hands and it scooped mum and james up and took them in the bushes. The bridge started whispering “I will tell you a hint. You have to say the password of the underworld but you will never get it. Is it bridge. No. Is it fire. How do you know. It was burnt down in the 1980s. Oh nooo! Is my mum and bro back. Fine. Mum and james appeared with the hands again and the bridge was back to normal. We walk over it every day. It leads to a magical land. THE END.
Thursday, November 7, 2019
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ReplyDeleteHello Addison
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your writing with me - I am so impressed with the text you have created to go with this picture. I might take a lot more care around bridges from now on. I really liked your opening - I could almost hear you singing these words! I am thinking there might be another story to follow this - one that tells us about the magical land over the bridge.
OK i will definitely write another story about the magical land
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