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Monday, August 17, 2020

The waterfall of mud



  

The Waterfall of Mud

Once there was a man called Matt. He lived in a wondrous and mystical world full of magic. One day he was riding his bike to work, but then his wand fell out of his pocket and when it touched the ground the ground turned to mud and half of the world lowered and lowered and lowered some more. As soon as the wand touched the ground it also disappeared down the steep river of mud. He gasped. He noticed that if he did this with his wand, the only way to take the spell back is that he would have to use his wand or go in the deep dark woods and get a special liquid by fighting the dark night god. Many people have tried but failed to do so. The reason everybody is trying to get the liquid is because it makes you stronger and it gives you some powers that nobody has. So he walked over the sticky brown mud, and he eventually got there. When he got in through the gate to the gods house he got stopped by 5 mighty looking guards. 
"What are you doing here!!!" the biggest guard yelled. 
"I'm here to see the night god" he said confidently. 
"Sorry dude, your not allowed to get the magic liquid any more". 
"No i'm ahhh oh i'm here to sign up for the servants", the guards looked at each other confusingly and let him in. 
He saw the pretty metallic golden poles holding the roof as the sun roof reflected on to the white concrete ground. At the end of the massive room the dark night god sat at his dark throne with swords sticking out of it, people say that if anyone other then the god touched it you would be cursed for LIFE. He saw the god and got very nervous. The god had a black top with pictures of skulls. He had a scary hyena at his side with a chain collar. He was so nervous that he ran out and said to the guards 
"I will be back with a visitor that is also signing up for the servants!!!" Once again the guards looked at each other confusingly. Matt came back with his friend John getting dragged behind him. 
"Remember the plan," Matt whispered to John, 
"I DIDN'T HEAR THE PLAN I DIDN'T EVEN SAY I WANTED TO COME, I SAID NO!!!" 
"Calm down John, they will hear you". John frowned. Matt bursted into the house and whispered
 "Let's make this quick." The god looked at them and got up from his mighty throne and said
"You two can not defeat me", 
"yes we can!!!" said Matt. He charged too the god and got so close that he charged back and replaced him with John and pushed him closer and closer to the god. Umm, John tried to run away but Matt didn't let him
"You got this John"
So John pulled out his wand from his pocket and started chanting a sentence.
"alegro zenthos!" 
The wand started to glow.
 "Flame ball!" he yelled but the god was to quick, he dogged it like its nothing.
"Super stomp!" he stomped so hard that the ground shacked and John and Matt tripped over, when they got back up they saw that the ground was covered with cracks. They had to be carefull.
"spash octo!" A massive wave splashed on to the god.
"Oh wait I just remembered that the gods only weakness is water" The dark night god climbed up one of the golden poles and holded on. 
"Fine, have the liquid I don't care just don't do that again!" So Matt walked home. When he got home he got out a glass and poured some magic liquid in the glass and drank the magic liquid and suddenly bright blue wings appeared on his back and a glowing halo turned up on his head. He held up his hands and a bright light beamed out of it and he shot it to the ground, the ground turned to concrete and half of the world was now the right length. Matt had hidden the magic liquid where nobody could find it. Matt and John lived happily ever after. THE END

5 comments:

  1. Hi Addison, you have put a lot of effort into this story, ka pai. I really enjoyed reading it the other day, thank you for sharing.

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  2. Hey Addison, I really like how well have described things in this story. I especially like the part where you said that bright blue wings appeared on his back and a glowing halo. Just double check that you have the capital letters you need for things like the word I'm.

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  3. Hi Addison,
    I like this beucase it has lots of cool information about a the waterfall of mud. This also is great becuase I love the picture of the mud waterfall.
    Why did you do this and was it challenging? What happened to the guy that was at the top of the mud waterfall.
    From Zoe

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  4. Hi Addison,
    I like this Because lots of cool information about the waterfall of mud. This also is great because I love the picture of the mud waterfall.
    Why did you do this and was it challenging? What happened to the guy that was at the top of the mud waterfall?
    From Riley

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  5. Hi Addison I'm Connor.I really like your story you put a lot of effort into this. I can tell that you're worked really hard .From Connor.

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