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Friday, March 6, 2020

Dinosaur Story

The Breaking news
by Addison

Slowly a blue head started rising out of the big splashing waves i couldn't believe my eyes it was a water monster they are very friendly creatures they are in the Dinosaur family. I love water monsters but I,ve never seen one they are quit extrodinary i couldn't  help but take it home THE END


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  1. SharonApril 9, 2020 at 11:34 AM

    You drew me into your story, I wanted to learn more about this water monster. Did you read your story to someone to check your punctation? For example " I couldn't believe my eyes. It was a water monster. They are very friendly creatures. They are in the Dinosaur family. How did you care for your water monster?

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